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Inaya's pov
"Congratulations, Innu oh sorry, sorry,'Dr.Inaya Khan' on achieving your dream, I knew from starting that you would achieve your goal," Sarah said while hugging me tightly which I was unable to breathe .
"Areee Sara, let me breathe, I think you kill me before I take in charge as a doctor," I said while laughing, and she left me with a pout.
"Innu beta you know you're the first doctor of our family, and today we are very proud of you," my mom said while her eyes were filled with tears .
It was my graduation day, Finally My 6 years of hardwork, sleepless night, assignments,stressful internship,hostels, wardens and of course the seniors how can I forget them,everything has came to end. Yes! I waited for years to show those who doubted my ability to this phase of life, and this is just starting. There is a lot more to go.
"INAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" I came out of my thought when my best friend Aloo called me before I would react someone pushed me down the stairs.
"Mmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa."I opened my eyes with jerks, and I was lying down on the floor.
"Wait, this is not the floor of collage's stairs, but where am I??? Oh Allah, Am I dead? Do I directly came to heaven. But I didn't do anything to come to heaven, but how?" I slowly sat on the floor and looked around. All I could see was that angels were surrounded by wings, and all were wearing colour dresses. Wait, do angels wear colours, dress?? But why do they look so similar. Waitt! Should dead peoples not put make-up when they come here? Ohh,That's why they are looking at me like that.But some among the lady angels are like some have painted their face.
"Inaya, what happened?"Someone asked me from the backside, and why do it feel so similar. Wait, I remember that voice it's ...it's my aloo's voice. And turn to her and asked loudly, " Areee alooo you are also dead?but how did you came to heaven.According to character you should been in hell right?"and everyone starting laughing.
"Everyone be quiet," a sharp, clear voice ordered everyone, and yeah, of course, how could I forget her? She was also the one who made my years of mbbs journey a living hell." Even this dayan (ghost) is dead, and oo god! But why ?? Can't you give me some peace in heaven, too? Why did you drag every single disaster here to spoil My peace." I said a bit loudly, and my aloo laughed.
"Who the hell is dayan here and Inaya, you were sleeping in class, right?" This time, it was head mistress and dammit it was just a dream, but it was such a beautiful dream.I thought my journey of another 4 years went very smoothly and became a doctor. Well, see, here I am, standing like a small inno cent soul in front of this lion. Oh god! PLEASE SAVE....
"After this class, you should be present in my cabin, understood." As soon as she finished saying this , I apologised, and she left not before giving a death stare.
"By the way, Innu, what was the dream about? Hmm, let me guess! Was it about ..."
"No aloo for god's sake don't guess anything, please I will tell everything in evening. And I know what kind of imagination you're making in this dirty mind. So the dream is not about it. "
"Well, that was a disappointment," She whispered, and we laughed
"INAYA AND ALEENA GET OUT," the teacher shouted at us, and it was not new to, so we went out silently.
In canteen
"Innu, after class can you come with me?" Aleena said while sipping her coffee.
"Sorry I can't, today my family is going for shopping because some family function is coming". While I denied her request.
"Innu please come with me , I promise I will drop you at mall before 6pm. I even brought my sister car. Also you will love the place."she pleaded with a puppy face.
"OK fine I will come. By the way where are we going ?" I asked while taking the last slice of the bread roll.
"It's suspense"
After 2 hours later
"Aloo is this the place you told me?" Asked her While looking at the abandoned place with narrowed eye.
"Innu you know right my sister is a journalist. So she is here to take a documentary for her solo program."
"But what is so special about this place?" I asked her with some curiousity.
"This is a old chocolate factory and this place belongs to oberois."suddenly we heard a voice from behind which we were startled but insteadly we realised it was aloo's sister.
"This factory is closed since 2 years because of they added drugs in chocolate and selled near school and college area and even small kids could buy it for cheap rates. Also see this, this is the information I collected from nearby police station and in this information, it says there is more than 250 drug cases registered that though only from school kids and 400 cases from collage kids. So just imagine there will be more cases which are not registered yet."she showed us the proof. And yes it was true I do remember, it was the time of my neet coaching time.There was some news related to it in newspapers and it went for months.
"OK but what happened after that? How did this factory closed? And what happened to the kids?" I asked her because the more I know about it, the more curiousity builds up.
"Before it gets into more problems one of the senior police has taken action against this oberois, but after 3 days there found this police officer dead body in a drainage canal near his house and this case has turned into a unsolved case."she said while show in the photo of the police officer and continue"After 1 month, this case was again opened by another senior officer but this time Malik group of industry was strong supportor to reopen this and they was able to prove to court all the illegal activity of this chocolate factory and they won the case."
"Malik group, there are main investor of our collage. But why did they file case against this oberois? Also fews years back, both the companies was good each other right did?"This time it was aloo asked her.
"Yes Malik and oberois were in good terms almost 9 years back but something happened between them and they are rivals now." She said while checking her camera.
"Everything is OK did but why did you came here? Don't you feel a strange while seeing the factory because it's giving me a horror feel"I said to her while looking at the surrounding. Man! Trust me it's giving me some terror feeling like something is going to happen tonight.
Before didi could say anything we heard a car sound and we three hide behind the bushes. And trust me yaar I am dammn sure they will snake or wild animal inside this forest.
Author's pov
Three cars arrived in front of the chocolate factory and they were covering there face with a black cloth. And one of the them were taking a boy around the age of 5 or 6 yrs who is wearing a hospital dress. They were taking him inside the factory.
"Hmm didi who are they? And why did they brought that small boy to the factory? Aleena asked to her sister who was equally shocked as them but she made sure that she recorded everything in her camera.
"Heyy didi don't tell me they kidnapped that child. But if it is, then why did they brought him here?"Inaya shared her thoughts
"I think there is more untold stories behind this case.Maybe there might be somewhere interesting.Come let's go and dig it."Aamilah (aleena's sister) said and Inaya nodded in response. Of course something is definitely cooking in her head and it is visible on her face.
"Inaya where are you going idiot. Whatever she says you are going to do it or what? Areee even if a goat dies in neighbours house she will go and investigate it. She is thinking herself as detective. Areee Innu baby please come back to your sense."she said while stopping her.
"Aloo don't be such a baby yaar, look it's gonna be soo fun and we can also help that kid to escape. So chup and come let's join her."Inaya said leaving Aleena's hand and walk towards the factory.
"Ya Allah please save me. You know right, I didn't even found my true love. I don't want to die very soon. Please save me Allah."Aleena thought for a while and took slow steps towards the factory.
It took them one hour to get inside the factory, since it was around 7 in evening, it was dark inside and dead silent in cooridor. After walking a bit more the found some light in big hall.
Inaya's pov
It really took us one hour to sneak inside the factory and by now it became dark outside and we were having difficulty to find our way. Also I texted my sister that "I have a important job so don't wait for me." And made our phone silent mood.
Afterwards we found a light in big hall, when we went near and hide ourselves behind each pillar. All we could see some people were playing cards and some were checking something in boxes. Also that some boy who was wearing hospital dress was lying down in a bedsheet.He really look so weak and he will definitely become more weak because of cold breeze of floor.
"Hey didi see that kid he is too weak, why did they brought him here? Was it because of drugs ? Whatever we have to help that kid " I whispered to her.
"Areee Innu shut up! How are you going to help him,huh?Open your eyes and see there are dangerous people with many weapons. Also I don't want to die because .... see I am very hungry. If I die before eating something yummy my ghost will haunt you" Aleena said while dramatically holding her stomach.
"Aleena if you die right now , just imagine how peaceful will be our lifes for rest of the years"Aamilah said while she pout and I laughed seeing her state.
"Acha enough let's do something ,before that try to cover our mask with our shawls or that can identify us easily. And didi put your camera in that table. I think no one can able to see it and we can capture everything." We covered our face but before we could move forward Aloo's phone rang and guess what it was not in silent mode.
Adnan's pov
Everyone present in the room had sweat on the forehead, fear in their eye, and gulping while looking at their angry boss. They all knew someone or something had made a wrong move.If it was someone among them, then it would be their last day.
"Do you guys know why I called all the entire team here?" I said in a cold voice while staring at them."Rahul, who was supposed to attend Malhorta's project ??" I continued.
"Shanaya and team, sir,"
"Except Shanaya, rest all can leave now,"I ordered them. Everyone obeyed their boss and went outside silently.
"How many years have you been working here?"I asked while checking at the Malhorta's file.
"More than 8 years, sir,"she gulps, staring at the floor while her hands and legs are shaking.
"So you might know, the project of Malhorta's project took more than 1 and half years, also it is a very important project to the company, right?" And she nodded."Then WHY DIDN'T YOU ATTEND THIS MEETING AND WHY THE HELL YOU SEND SOMEONE WHO DIDN'T KNOW THE SMALL BIT OF THIS PROJECT, ARE YOU THIS DUMP? IT'S A HUGE MESS NOW ! CAN'T YOU PEOPLE DO A SMALL WORK PROPERLY?"I snapped at her, but now her state was worsened.
"Bhai, please calm down.Look at her,seeing her, I think she might have a reason to leave this project to someone." It was my brother Irfan, he is my right hand in office as well as in mafia world. Also, he can easily understand one person's thinking by looking at their facial expression.
"Seriously, Irfan?" I asked in a serious tone, and while he gave me a done look. According to me it is a small problem which i can solve with a single meeting with Malhorta, but for a month Shanaya's behivour was a bit strange and I want to know why, because she is one of our trusted and sincere employe and head of the team.
"So tell me, why didn't you attend the meeting?" I asked in a not less than a serious tone.
"Wo.... si. .rr I am.... s..or. .ry .... My...s..on.. is hospitalised. Two weeks before, I got an Anonymous call, and that man asked me to give Malhorta's project information to them. First, he offered me money, which was able to pay for my son's surgery, but when I refused to take that money, he started to threaten me, telling that he would harm my son. But still, i was not ready to give the information, "she said while tears were continuously flowing through her cheeks.
"But this morning, I was just 10 minutes away from Malhorta's building.I got a call from the nurse informing me that my son is missing. That's why I didn't attend the meeting."
"Do you find your son safely ?" Irfan asked, and she nodded, but her eyes were telling something else.
"Where did you find him?"This time, I asked her.
"S..ir .. W..o..h.. he.. was the..re ..in..roo..m its...self.."
"Irfan, come let's go to hospital and let's have a check on her son's surgery details." her eyes got widen after hearing me.
"Sir sir, it's ok he is really fine now. U don't need to come. He is actually feeling better."she said while tears were flowing from cheeks.
"Then why are you crying ?"I asked, but she was silent
"ANSWER ME, SHANAYA."
"Sir, please help me. My son is in danger. They kidnapped my son, but this time they didn't ask about Malhorta's file,they were demanding the password of the secret chamber."she relieved the truth.
"Secret chamber? But how did they come to know about the chamber?" Irfan asked. Yes, other than us (Adnan,dad, Irfan, Rizwan , Ameer &shanaya) no one else knew about it.Secret chamber is which it contains company's all kind of important sources are hidden especially the exclusive traditional dresses made for business partners.
"I don't know how they came to know about it, but if I didn't give the password of the secret chamber before midnight. Then my son won't be alive."she kneeled down, crying
"Shanaya, before sunrise, I will bring your son to you. Trust us, " I said to her while giving an assuring look.
" Irfan ask drive to take her home safely. Shanaya go with them as I said I will bring your son to you,"I said in a not so soft voice, and after hearing me, She nodded and left.
I took my phone and dialed "Ameer I have sent you a number. Track it down. I need every freaking details. "And I disconnected the call. But all I wonder is who is back of secret chamber? Is it from the mafia world or someone from the past? And about shanaya even though she is young. she is excellent at her job, who I can trust and give every company's project or details, that's why she is head of all departments. Even now, her son is in danger because of the company still she didn't give them. She is a single mom, and whatever happens, I will bring back her son before midnight.
I came back from thoughts when I heard a notification sound, and it was an ameer's message.
"You doubt was correct. The location of this phone number shows at the old chocolate factory of oberois,18 mins from your office and as you know that factory has been closed for last 2 years. Also, to find the details of this number is a bit too tricky it at least needs more than half an hour.
Is it something important.....?
What's the matter? Oh, it must be something important or else you won't ask me.
Do you need me ,devil?"
As soon as I saw the message, I understood the reason why they kidnapped that innocent kid. I called him and explained everything and asked him to reach there with the caller's details.
After an half hour later....
Two cars, along with 40 bodyguards, have arrived at the old chocolate factory. From first car adnan has stepped out. From second car Ameer and Irfan.
"Hey Bhai,why do I get a serial ambience?"Ameer asked out of nowhere.
"Serial ambience? No! But why do you feel like that?"Irfan replied with a confusing look.
"Areee yaar in Indian serials, the main female lead gets kidnapped or will be in danger in abandoned place which is not less than equal to a horror place and in one side she will be praying to god like 'please god save me from this dangerous people, let my charming prince come and save me' while her prince makes a herotic entry with mass entry song and fight with every donkeys , also get a bit injury in head or leg and runs towards to her while in background all the lovey-Dovey flashbacks will be also running with them in slow motion. But a bit before he reaches her ...Doom!! He also fell down, and he faints. And my doubt if he wants to faints, can't he faints in his home or why to come in that horror place and get a massive injury? And who is gonna remember the flashbacks when there are going to die?"Ameer said in a dramatic while the rest three of them was giving him in a weird look.
"Ameer sir, there are having flashback before dieing because there are deeply in love or connected with their soulmate" while Rohit (adnan's PA) joins with Ameer.
"Aree bhai, when did you get time to fall in love? Well, this is all rubbish. Who is gonna remember their lover when their gonna die. I never believe in this love or soulmate, "Ameer said.
"Sir, I only have a sister, and she is obsessed with frictional books and watches different types of dramas. I usually spend some time with her, and that time, she used to say which story she read , what happened in the story, how the main leads fall in love, etc. So I do know all kinds of frictional love stories but never believe in true love. " Rohit explained to him.
[ Rohit only has one sister, which is his only family ]
"Oh achaa, after hearing frictional love stories, don't fall Iove with an imaginary character. Even my ex was super obsessed with this kind of stupid and what they are getting after being hell obsess with this character. By the way, Irfan what are you thinking yaar?" Ameer said while Rohit chuckled at his dialogue.
"Areee Ameer, you missed a point in that serial ambience. See in that see there will be two parties, party-A will be enemies who will be planning to do some mischief and will be so happy that they enemies will die within seconds but there happiness will never last long before that the hero will come of this double strong. On the other hand,party-B, who will be praying for they loved ones and doing pujas."Irfan completed the rest side of the scene, but there was another person who was in a disbeliefed stage.
"This three are most powerful ones in mafia world and see what happens to them.I don't know when they are getting time to see this serial stuff.Also see they behaving like old aunties who never miss a serial episodes and discussion it like it's some international case. Imagine if they had some tea and snacks they would have sit there , and finish the story and would have bring the dead ones-alive or injured one back to normal. "I thought while staring at his three old nannies.
"Are you guys here for a serial discussion or to save shanaya's son ?" And I brought them back with my cold but a bit dangerous voice.
"Ameer, where are the details of that number?" I asked him, and he handed me a file. After reading it, I noticed something different, but before I could ask anything , we heard a scream from inside.
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